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Writing Prompts For 2nd Graders

Regina Said:

Please grade my SAT essay out of 12? (add both graders up)?

We Answered:

College Board website has examples of each essay. Part of the grade is a solid demonstration of the English language, like spelling, grammar, etc. You have that part down.

My criticism is your introduction. You need to define, in your own words, the conflicts between "knowing facts" and "understanding ideas." Without that, your first couple sentences make no sense.

The most important part of the essay is the introduction. It consists of (1) definition of the two sides (2) a clear elucidation of the conflict between the two sides, the why and the how, (3) a strong thesis statement where you take a side, (4) a transition statement leading to your examples.

As it is I think you will score in the 8-9 range. Good luck

Jeffery Said:

Opinions please, actual english assignment.?

We Answered:

not a bad essay fix grammar though

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