Lydia Said:

Tips about writing a mystery story?

We Answered:

I have written two mystery novels and two novellas as part of a series I hope to publish. To begin with, I always start with a few ideas for twists and turns I want the story to take. Then I write up a quick synopsis of what has to happen to move the story to the pre-determined conclusion. The next step is to divide the synopsis in obvious chapters and then to outline those chapters.

In the situation you have described, it is almost a given that the professional writer has already made some basic assumptions about where he wants his story to go, so here are some things you may want to avoid.

• Don't introduce new characters.
• Don't write any insurmountable twists.
• Don't kill off any of the primary suspects.
• Keep track of the new chapters so that you don't write conflicting action.
• Take your cues from the style and tone of the opening chapter.

What I would do is make a list of all of the characters as they are introduced, and note all of their personality traits. Then outline each successive chapter as it appears. Write an outline of what might happen next, and then flesh out a chapter. Use lots of dialogue if possible, and keep the descriptive remarks short but vivid.

Poor - She was a plain girl in a plain dress with red hair and freckles, and she had a lot to say.
Better - She stood out because of her red hair and her big mouth. Other than that, nobody would have noticed her.
Best - She talked so much you'd think she was the hostess of a TV show about homely redheads.

I also strongly suggest familiarizing yourself with the genre. For a crash course, read the first chapters of any books by the following authors:
• Mickey Spillane
• Raymond Chandler
• Elmore Leonard
• Dorothy Parker

Edward Said:

PLEASE ANSWER!!! Scholastic Alliance for Young Artists and Writers...HELP!!?

We Answered:

It's unique, as far as I know. I'd like to read more! But I've never heard of Scholastic Alliance for Young Artists and Writers, so I don't know what you're look for. Can you submit your work individually, or does it need to be done through a school?

Bobby Said:

Canadian Teen Writing Contests?

We Answered:

I'm a teen living in Toronto too, haha. Most writing contests are a bit more national- the best way to learn of them is to either subscribe to Writer's Digest (maybe check the site), or ask someone (either a librarian, or an English teacher).

:)