Darryl Said:

Could you please grade my SAT essay?

We Answered:

Add one more example (one more paragraph) and you've got yourself a near perfect score.

Great introduction, clear thesis, great structure. But always use three examples. Second paragraph should be longer, it needs a little more support. What did Einstein offer to the world? Talk about his invaluable discoveries and get it closer to the length of the third paragraph. The more you write, the higher the score. Excellent grammar and use of vocabulary, however your final quote seems to contradict your thesis.

Hope this helps.

Keith Said:

Help in English------?

We Answered:

1. By whom were the modern olympic games started?

2. Since 1896, which sports have been included in every modern Olympics?

3. Where will the next Olympic Games be held?

4. Which sport is played with a bow and arrow?

Duane Said:

Why doesn't U.S. use chemical-infused rockets to start rain?

We Answered:

cause bush is not smart

Delores Said:

What's a great advertisement?

We Answered:

im still at the palm bay campus trying to figure this crap out as well.dearmin really is making this paper hard.