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Florida Writing Prompts

Allison Said:

Do you like this short story?

We Answered:

I thought it was great, though the line about adopting the baby caused me to stop and say "why?" and think that maybe it was 2 gay guys and that spoiled the surprise of the last line. Maybe something like "wanted children after we married - would have gone for a baby girl" has the same meaning without being as obvious.

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