Rose Said:

Can People Comment on this piece of Writing?

We Answered:

Alright. After the first paragraph, I stopped.
First thing-THE ENTIRE FIRST PARAGRAPH IS ONE SENTENCE. No offense, but that's called run-ons.
Two: When you have dialogue, you would type it as:
"My wand," said Kali as she swiftly moved her hand and a large bundle of orbs came to form her wand in her right hand. "and my book." This time she held her hand flat and some orbs started to gather to create a medium-sized book with about 150 pages. "Oh, and my suitcase." As she pointed to the floor with her wand, her suitcase appeared from the orbs and laid out on the floor. It was open, exposing the fact that her suitcase was packed & ready
sorry, that last sentence was of my creation. w/e.
also, try to not do so much repitition of words. Like, in the run-on first paragraph, you said window way too much. And, in this last paragraph, you could probably not use orbs and wands so much.
when you wrote, "Yeah, so you need your wand, your book, and clothes, erm, anything else," said Reon trying to help, you need to have a comma between Reon and trying, and do the same for the rest of the times that you did that.
no offense, but did you get your inspiration from Harry Potter?

Eddie Said:

Can you help me? 'cuz i need some!?

We Answered:

think about the bill of rights (the first ten amendments)

for example amendment #2: the right to bear arms. While you have the right to own a gun there are restrictions, you cannot buy one until you are 18, you cannot buy one if you commit a felony, you have to have a permit to keep the gun and you have to shoot it in a controlled environment (eg with a hunting permit, or at a range)

You have the right to speak (freedom of speech). While there are not too many limits on free speech in the US you are restricted to not making up libelous or slanderous comments that could hurt someone else's reputation. You cannot yell FIRE in a crowded room.

You have the right to privacy. Police cannot search your property or your person without your permission. This does have limits as you shouldn't really have anything illegal on you in the first place. If they suspect you are doing something illegal in plain sight you give up your right.

Those are some suggestions... look up the bill of rights and you could come up with some ideas from that!

Dawn Said:

Can you please help me in java? i really need someone's help..?

We Answered:

Here's the code:

//import ?


public class Easy{
public static void main(String args[]){
final int numLockers=1000;
int numOpen=0;
boolean lockers[]=new boolean[numLockers];
for(int i=1;i<=numLockers;i++){
for(int j=i;j<=numLockers;j+=i){
if(lockers[j-1]){
lockers[j-1]=false;
}else{
lockers[j-1]=true;
}
}
}
for(boolean test:lockers){
if(test){
numOpen++;
}
}
System.out.println("There are "+numLockers+" lockers, of which "+numOpen+" are open");
}
}

This gives me 31 lockers open of 1000 and 70 lockers open of 5000.