Mattie Said:

Help with Essay Tips?

We Answered:

I wrote a small text for a blog. Perhaps you can give it a try and help me with a comment:

http://writinghood.com/style/improve-the…

Hers's another one i've found in Yahoo:

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Hector Said:

Essay help!?!?! FCAT IS TOMORROW!!!!?

We Answered:

4...):
Your introduction paragraph isn't so "attention grabbing", but it isn't terrible neither. But I must say your transitional word are terrible! DON'T USE words like firstly...secondly...thirdly....lastly. Use words like furthermore, additionally, moreover. Also NEVER use "in conclusion"...it's just so lame....Instead use all in all, in summary, or with this in mind. You have a lot of concrete specifics which is good! Also a pretty decent level of vocabulary. Four main components you must keep in mind.
1. Conventions (use of periods, commas, etc.)
2. Vocabulary
3. Transitional Words
4. Concrete specifics!!! (MUST)

Terry Said:

Do you know the answer to this question regarding the Odyssey ?

We Answered:

Are you asking me to write a 1000 page essay for you with references?

Robert Said:

to all teachers, or High school students!?

We Answered:

The one I had in 8th grade
was something like "Do people who read at home
do better in school?"
Others got
"What are are different ways of transportation? And what are
their advantages?"
They are always cheesy stuff to write about usually
having to do with the school.

Some tips:
Always take 10 mins to plan and organize how
you are going to write your essay.

Then begin with a hooking sentence
or state a statistic. If you don't know
a statistic... make one up. That's what I did and I got a 6.
Always use big words and avoid using "A lot"
Never ever use that.

Always end with a good conslusion.

Never ever say "well now I am going to
tell you why I believe....blah blah"

And finally,
don't fret...relax.

Good luck.

the best part of FCAT is you get to skip classes and
you get a free day

Freddie Said:

FCAT help. GOOD at writing amazing papers? :) ?

We Answered:

the best paper you could write, would be one that answered the question with an honest and opinionated response. You should make a list, then pick one. Write the pros and cons of the idea, how you would implement it, and why you chose that one. Good LUCK!

** If we wrote your paper--you wouldn't learn to write better.