Albert Said:

english help?

We Answered:

1. similes and metaphors
2. convince...point of view

Alvin Said:

english help please?

We Answered:

1. Similes and metaphors
2. convince... point of view

Rita Said:

Insperation please? Five stars and ten points for the very best most descriptive answer!!! Thanks baby dolls!?

We Answered:

Meeting a writer's wall is the worst:(

Opening:

Is this what it felt like to die? Your breath shallows and your mind blanked out, the feeling of unable to move eventhough you tried? As if your limbs are no longer connected to your body, obeying you? Then dying sucks. I thought dying was supposed to be peaceful? Hell, even my grandmother smiles before she went to sleep forever, that proves enough right? But why am I in no condition to conjure up a smile let alone feeling peaceful. All I could remember was the vivid image of Darcy jumping, no, falling down the cliff and next I was joining him, all the while screaming my lungs out, the thrill of it, exhilirating! But it was not excitement I screamed for, but fear. Who am I fearing? Or even worse, what?

I feel so much pain radiating throughout my body! As I lay awake yet asleep, it feels so wrong. Beep...beep...beep...an irritating beeping sound sounded nearby and it amplifies wift each beeping sound it made. I felt hands, touches all over my body. What are they doing? Why are they touching me? I panicked. Someone touched me on my forearm and a strange pain pierced through me, I wanted to gasp, shout, call for them to stop but I can't move a thing. Stop! Stop! Please stop! I pleaded but no one responds. As the excruciating pain continues to tear through me it became even more unbearable.

A tear slid along my cheeks.

'More anesthetic. Hurry! She's waking up!' An impatient voice sounded beside me. Just before I felt another jab in my left arm and I fell into deep sleep, embracing the darkness again.

Descriptions:

Her dark eyes taunts me, daring me to take the bet. Her thick lips twitched into a cunning smile obviously meaning to mock me, now that look goes so well with her heart-shaped face. She flipped her brown hair with her fingers and then twirled the strands of her curls. She's beautiful even though she doesn't believe so. Such an angellic face with apparent toughness, who wouldn't fall for that?

Quotes:

'We stopped looking for monsters underneath our bed when we realised that they are inside of us.'

Ending: (I loved writing endings, haha)

'A great year huh?' Darcy smirked and I couldn't help but laughed at his irony. How could a simple camping trip turned into an experience that had changed our lives forever? So many secrets unraveled, so many mysteries solved, and above all, the journey we went through. Monsters, aliens, ghosts? I felt like I could take them all! What happened earlier this year is the beginning of my new life. I went along this camping trip, hoping I could sort myself out, rediscover myself, but as the saying go 'Be careful what you wish for' I would never argue against that anymore, I finally found myself again, a part of me that was burried and hidden beneath those masks and even more, a found myself a person which I can trust again, and live forever with.

'Yes, this is a terrific year.' I said as I slid my hands into his and together we faced the world.

~Do I sound a bit dramatic? Haha. Hope I did help:)

Marvin Said:

what's wrong with this.. no println statement.?

We Answered:

/**
*
* @author Kaushalya Damitha
*/

import java.util.Scanner;
public class Main {
public static void main(String[] args){
int day = getDay();
String desc = getMonthDesc();
int year = getYear();
System.out.println(day + " " + desc + " " + year);
}

public static int getDay(){
int day;
Scanner sc = new Scanner(System.in);
do {
System.out.print("Enter day: ");
day = sc.nextInt();
}
while((day < 1) || (day > 31));

return day;
}
/*
public static int getMonth(){
int month;
Scanner sc = new Scanner(System.in);
do {
System.out.print("Enter month: ");
month = sc.nextInt();
}
while ((month < 1) || (month > 12));

return month;
}
*/
public static int getYear(){
int year;
Scanner sc = new Scanner(System.in);
System.out.print("Enter year: ");
year = sc.nextInt();
return year;
}

public static String getMonthDesc(){
int month;
String desc = "";
Scanner sc = new Scanner(System.in);
System.out.print("Enter month: ");
month = sc.nextInt();
if (month == 1){
desc = "January";
}
if (month == 2){
desc = "February";
}
if (month == 3){
desc = "March";
}
if (month == 4){
desc = "April";
}
if (month == 5){
desc = "May";
}
if (month == 6){
desc = "June";
}
if (month == 7){
desc = "July";
}
if (month == 8){
desc = "August";
}
if (month == 9){
desc = "September";
}
if (month == 10){
desc = "October";
}
if (month == 11){
desc = "Novemeber";
}
if (month == 12){
desc = "Decemeber";
}
return desc;
}

}

This is the fixed version

If u need any help contact me
Kaushalya Damitha

Kenneth Said:

java programming.. (last question..) -__-?

We Answered:

kind of hard to tel a error with out the code :P

send me the code ill help