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6th Grade Writing Prompt

Courtney Said:

Having problems sorting out my code could someone help me with this program please!! it is vb.net ?

We Answered:

Please break your questions into smaller pieces and post them here bit by bit. It is so complicated, moreover your codes seems like a semi pseudo code. Get it right man.

Ella Said:

Whats the proudest moment youve ever felt in your life?

We Answered:

the day m daughter was born,i used to sell drugs and was a dope head and got busted and was supposed to go to prison for a pretty ong time, they said if i could try rehab instead and i did for 9 months live in "salvation army"1 month after i graduated my daughter was born. i have been clean ever since...

Audrey Said:

Please could someone help me with my essay.?

We Answered:

This is a very good essay, you're a very talented writer! Your grammar and story formation is excellent! I suggest that you omit one of the attempts you mentioned in your essay to regain your friends friendship, and approval. In its place try to emphasis you're learned experiences. This will make the essay shorter as you are not giving a summary of an event and it answers the questions. Good luck ^-^

Gina Said:

Could someone please help me with my essay?

We Answered:

I did some editing to your essay.

Throughout my life, I have seen peer pressure in many forms. I rarely paid attention to peer pressure because it had never directly affected me. However, in the autumn of 2007 I experienced peer pressure first hand.
It (what is it?) had all started when I began my first day of 6th grade. That day, I was very excited. There was little doubt in my mind that the year was going to be excellent because my two best friends, Jennifer and Alicia, were there with me. For a time, that year progressed smoothly, but soon things started to unravel. Jennifer and Alicia started to act “cool” by swearing and teasing students who were different, including me. Soon, most of my classmates began avoiding me in order to avoid being labeled unpopular themselves. At that time, with the loss of my two best friends I started feeling isolated and alone.
Desperate, I made numerous attempts to regain Alicia and Jennifer’s friendship, My first attempt was to reason with them. One day, I managed to locate Jennifer and I tried to make her see that what happened between us was unfair. I was given a slap in the face for my efforts. In my next method I tried to explain to Alicia how hurt I felt; my attempts were futile.


That should get you started and good luck.

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