Kim Said:

On dropping out of high school!?

We Answered:

NOOOOOO do not do it. You would not be able to stay in London long enough to write a column let alone a novel. The years of Americans escaping to explore their art is long gone. You need to check the rules for living and working in any foreign country. If you are a Freshman you can still learn a lot from your English teachers not to mention great novelists have lived a life longer than a freshman. Sorry to be blunt but you need to finish high school and then think about learning as much as you can in college about writing. Your life will be richer honest.

Sheila Said:

What do you think of my writing?

We Answered:

I'm going to be sincere: I don't think it's very good. But don't be disappointed, I think you can improve by doing some or all of these things:

1) Read a book about writing. I would recommend Stephen King's "On Writing." It's a good read full of good advice from a master.

2) Read the best writers in the genre you like. Read newspapers and magazines.

3) Write shorter paragraphs.

4) Plot before you write: these paragraphs seem to be a rambling on. If you have thought a bit more you could have focused them better.

5) Avoid cliché phrases like these: "she was like an ole sore tail cat," "She lived a little on the wild side."

Good luck.

Kyle Said:

Should I write my two job titles from the same company on my resume?

We Answered:

Put your title as Production Assistant then within the bullet points out that you started as an intern and worked your way up. Save it for the last bullet. So:

Production Assistant
-I did this
-I did that
-I rocked this
-Began as an Intern in (year); promoted to Production Assistant in (month/year)

John Said:

How do you like my short story for class?

We Answered:

It's sweet. But there are too many sentences at the beginning starting with ands and buts. Get rid of some of those.

Why were you wearing a fidel castro hat? i dont get it.

and what do you mean by 'faith in humanity'? there is no explanation to what that means.

If you feel that you want to send such private things out there then sure send it in to school. But im sorry, it seems like you just want everyone to hug you and make you feel better, and feel bad for you. I may be wrong though.

Bryan Said:

Anyone want to read chapter 1 of the book I'm writing?

We Answered:

I have cerebral palsy
my whole left side is affected



it sucks

Sylvia Said:

what can happen for writing out narcotic scripts and signing the drs name for people i know?

We Answered:

Firstly, you DO NOT go on the internet and post about this, ADMITTING to a crime.

You didn't mean to do anything wrong, but you did something illegal.

You will delete your yahoo account, and you will contact a lawyer.

You will not talk to any police officers or ANYONE besides your lawyer under ANY circumstances. (Besides if your lawyer tells you to.)

You will rate me best answer. And you will try to live life on as best you can. Delete your account!

Ohh and contact send me a yahoo messege or however that works.