Maureen Said:

what is wrong with this resume? can you find it...?

We Answered:

All of what follows is only my opinion:

I looked quickly, and the only thing I saw was your use of the word "I" under some responsibilities.

Also (I looked a bit further), in some you said: Duties include... Keep consistent - in some words, you end with -ing. Others ended in -ed. I also noticed some verb tenses are present; others are past. Spacing is off, but that may come from the cut and paste. Instead of "Security Officer 02/25/2004 Until present." Just list the different jobs as they appear to be in different places. I am not sure I would include the Home Maintenance.

I'd better stop there.

Benjamin Said:

How should I write this college paper?

We Answered:

This is a really good thing to write about. Focus on telling about your boyfriend and why he changed your life. What did he have that Anthony didn't? You don't have to compare him to Anthony in the paper, just use the question to explain why he was so special that you moved there to be with him.

You can describe your boyfriend a bit, and describe how it felt meeting him and why it felt so right. Do it like a story, so the reader experiences some of the high points of your getting-to-know-you conversations, the flavor of the romance.

Discuss what went into your decision to move there. How did you tell your parents? Was it hard to fight their objections? Did you have to struggle to decide whether to move there or stay in your home area, or was it a no-brainer? Did it make you feel like you'd changed from a kid to an adult? Put your answers to these questions into your paper.

Andrew Said:

Can anyone tell me if I passed my Customs and Border patrol test?

We Answered:

You passed. Look at it like this: the formula is 1C20Rating1D20. Your rating goes where the word 'Rating' is. You have to make a minimum of a score of 70 to pass which is represented as '1C2070.01D20'. Your rating is a 94 which will be represented as '1C2094.01D20'

Joy Said:

what is wrong with this resume?

We Answered:

There is nothing wrong with it; it is just too long. It is advisable to have a resume that consists of 1 page. Try to shorten some items, you might even want to delete some (the ones that have nothing to do with the job that you are applying to). Keep only the ones that are relevant to the position you are applying. Also, look into creating a cover letter, they always make good impressions on employers (google for "sample cover letter"). Good luck!

Charlotte Said:

What kind of charter school is Obama vowing to help?

We Answered:

Excellent question, and you are right. The supreme court has taken religion out of the classrooms. But why is it alright for some schools, namely Madrassas in Minnesota and SanDiego, which have partial taxpayer funding, to be allowed to have separate prayer rooms, where students can bow toward Mecca 3 times per day. More liberal/ACLU bull crap.