Jamie Said:

Can anyone kindly edit my English writing (262 words only)?

We Answered:

A successful cover letter should be personal and show the receiver that you are well-informed about the position you are applying for and the company you will be working for, so you should find out the name of the person that will be, hopefully, accepting your application. If you have no way to find out this information, you should start with To Whom It May Concern, so here goes:

To Whom It May Concern,

My name is xxx and I have recently graduated in Communication Design from xxx. I moved to xxx in late February 2010 to study a Bachelor of Visual Arts, majoring in Digital Media, at xxx University. After a month, I have decided to withdraw from the course because I feel as though I am learning about things I do not have a passion for. I am planning to apply to study Graphic Design at the University of xxx during the second semester in August.

During my four-month break, I would like to gain some graphic design work experience. I feel that working practically in a professional environment, such as the one you offer, would give me an excellent opportunity to advance my existing skills and broaden my design knowledge.

I have always had a keen interest in graphic design, especially advertising, packaging and retail design. During the past two years I have developed some projects in brand identities, editorial designs, environmental designs, website designs and some simple Flash animation designs. I also have a year of experience working freelance for real clients in America and Europe.

I am a very hard-working and motivated person with a friendly disposition and a great work ethic. I find it no struggle to adhere to deadlines and I work co-operatively with others. Should you give me the opportunity to work for you, I will be available any day and would like to work two to three days a week. I would also be free, and more than happy, to assist in helping the your design team in their duties.

I am confident that I can apply my skills and experience to make a positive contribution to your company. I would love to have a chance to discuss this opportunity further.

Sincerely, (yes this is a great example of a time to use sincerely)
xxxx

Nathaniel Said:

Where can I find Senior Writers?

We Answered:

I run the website http://www.reversemortgagepage.com. I wrote the vast majority of the content myself. I could be interested in a writing gig...what did you have in mind?

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