Phillip Said:

I'm in a creative writing class...?

We Answered:

I like it! it's something that i would have kept reading... had there been more. the only real grammatical errors are:
in the 1st sentence, it should be 'thought' instead of 'though'
And I walked into room 203. is a fragment
you don't need a comma after ...thin calves
it should be She shrugged me off
it should either be left overs from dinner or left over dinner

but thats actually not alot. at all.

Keep up the good work!
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Bonnie Said:

What do you think about this creative writing piece?

We Answered:

It's a nice piece, but no real drama, or suspense. It started out totally great. I was feeling every word and understood what was going on., but then instead of the board breaking, the sun going in her eyes, her head hitting the diving board, etc,etc., this got boring real fast. People love suspesne and/or drama. You left us with her diving again and again for lord knows how long, with nothing to follow up with.

Ruby Said:

Can you help me make a title for my creative writing assignment?

We Answered:

The mission or the...........

Lloyd Said:

My enthusiasm for writing is failing me, help!?

We Answered:

The important thing to remember is: being a writer isn't a job. Real writing is something that just comes out in an overflow of your humanity and artistic passion. I think once you start worrying about whether you can write or not, it stops the natural flow that motivates the imagination and the writing willpower.

It sounds like you're going through something of a writer's block. I do understand what you're feeling because I went through a phase like that too, but if you truly love writing, then you won't ever not be a writer.

It's certainly not because you're 22, haven't achieved whatever goals you were aiming for, etc. This phase in your writing might be influenced by what is going on in your life, but it can be fixed.

If you can't find the motivation to write at the moment, take some time out. Don't try to force anything out of yourself if you don't want to. Maybe find another hobby to do (photography? painting? dancing?) or go for long walks to give yourself something to do. The best thing is not to linger on your worries, but keep your mind fresh and upbeat so that any new ideas can fully take shape.

Or if you do want to keep on writing, try joining writing challenges on journaling sites such as LiveJournal (communities like http://community.livejournal.com/linebyl… can be good to give yourself a mini challenge) and widening your writing genre.

Try anything and everything. Sometimes, it's just the lack of variety that can make you stuck in a little rut. Take some kind of break and with any luck, when you return to writing whatever you really want to focus on, you'll feel refreshed.

Best of luck. :^)

Leona Said:

Is their a good crafty at home job/business for someone with a disability?

We Answered:

She could consider freelance writing opportunities. Writing greeting cards can be a good way of working from home. There are an estimated three thousand greeting card publishers in the USA, Canada, England and Australia and many use freelance writers. Another good work from home opportunity can be found doing freelance proofreading jobs. Find out more at the site below.

Cody Said:

Need a job can help with English assignments at any level. am retired college professor.now working from home?

We Answered:

yes there are just go and find some.