Terrence Said:

I am a new learner of english, and i have an essay ,who can edit it for me ?Thank you!?

We Answered:

Writing essays as an ESL student can be very difficult, and you should definately seek out help to make this process easier for you. Using a professional editing service is one way to help you improve your grades.

The people who have offered suggestions for you here are very kind to have done so, however there remain uncorrected some errors. It is up to you, but if this essay is very important to you (or if others are in the future) and if you would like to continue to improve your English, you might consider using a professional essay editing and tutoring service.

I run a professional online editing service, www.EliteEditing.com.au. Please visit my website, and if I can be of help to you please let me know. (My email address is on the 'Contact Us' page on the website.)

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Good luck!