Maxine Said:

What is style in writing and making a piece of written english flow?

We Answered:

Your sentence structure isn't consistent, and you use to many qualifiers in describing some things. I know that sounds like "umm...what" but I'll give you an example:

"May possibly look at the use of complementary practises as they have been shown to be beneficial in assisting the reduction of stress..."

"May possibly" is redundant. You only need to use "May" or "possibly" but not both.

you can drop the word "been" and the words "in assisting the" and change reduction to "reducing"

I think this is what your paragraph should look like.

May look at the use of complementary practices as they have been shown to be beneficial in reducing stress. Students from the local college have expressed an interest in practicing aromatherapy massage on volunteers to gain experience for themselves. Surely, this is a win-win scenario as such co-ordination would come with a remit of the post.(not sure what a remit of the post is, you may want to be sure that is clarified better) Complementary alternative therapies are rarely regarded as having a role in therapeutic healthcare environments but, as people become exposed to them, they may regard them as beneficial to their well-being and contributing to increased health "