Theodore Said:

For English teacher, how can I write better?

We Answered:

Do whatever you can to talk with people. Have conversations, talk on the phone, the internet, ask people if they'll help critique you. It may be annoying- but after a while, you won't NEED their help!

BTW
Correctly, it is said: "...but I am finding obstacles in regard to writing."

Just thought I'd start you off ;)

Dianne Said:

need help for english? How to write better commentary!?

We Answered:

An opinion is a statement that must be backed up by facts (i.e., concrete detail). An opinion your argument that makes a point. After you state your opinion, you want to further develop your idea with explanations and just explore more deeply about it. Then you support your explanation and opinion with the "concrete details" (facts) from the literature.

Lena Said:

How to write a story well?

We Answered:

When ever I read a book or story I want my audience to feel that they are in the scenes. I want them to feel that they can touch the characters if they tried.

I focus on what my peer group says about the story and how it made them feel either good or bad I want the feedback.

Just write how you feel put as much detail into the emotion as possible. Don't use these big phrases or words to make your point.

Plus what helps is to let your writing "cool off". Which means write and then leave it alone for a while and come back to your work and reread it. that helps.

Virginia Said:

How would you write this in better English ?

We Answered:

Have you written a treatment?

It's pretty unlikely that an agent would even bother to read your whole script if they don't know who you are, especially if you have no prior experience/qualifications.

In case you don't know what a treatment is (which you probably should if you're serious about this script thing) go to this site:

http://www.writingtreatments.com/html/ho…

hope this is helpful, good luck with your script.