Lonnie Said:

Could you check my English writing?

We Answered:

Very nearly perfect. Only three small changes:

1) The comma between "century" and "we" is not needed.

2) customers'. The apostrophe goes on the outside of the "s", since it is plural possessive (the support of more than one customer).

3) support. This is not pluralized, as it is a mass noun.

Also on a side note, "is" is correct, since we are dealing with a single activity (creating products). The focus is creating, not products. If the focus were on the products, then you would eliminate the comma and replace "is" with "are".

So in short:
To date, for more than half a century we have been able to engage in creating products, which is the fruit of the customers' support.

Kelly Said:

will you plz check my poor english writing.?

We Answered:

like French musicals because I can feel the unique rhythms of the language itself.

The stage is simple and impressive, with an artistic sense and is to me an art form in itself.

I liked Matt Laurent's character "Quasimodo", who fell in love with someone who can never reciprocate his love.

A bird that flys high, renounces many things so as to lighten its body. Its inner self is born.

Jessie Said:

Please check my English writing?

We Answered:

We make a contribution to local communities by producing environmentally friendly products. Our policy is, "....


Take out the word "will" because it is a future tense verb. In business, no one cares about what you say you will do, but everyone cares about what you actually do now. Speak your reality. communities is a more friendly word than societies. you do the contribution by producing. environmentally is an adverb which describes the adjective friendly. Shorter sentences allow you to announce your message clearly with pauses to indicate complete thoughts.

"Being strict with quality and friendly to the environment." period inside the quotation mark. quality is a standard that you use and you operate with, not something you can act upon. read my quote and the way it flows. I've been in sales and marketing and I really like your idea.

Let me ask you...Are you Asian by any chance? because I know that in many languages the rules are much different than English and when advertising, the language used is modified to be more powerful. The changes are very minor and very important. if you need any other help, i am just an email away ok, thank you

Lillie Said:

Could you please check my English writing?

We Answered:

Forgot to capitalize "She" in the 3rd sentence.

Your teacher was not capable of what exactly? You assume the reader knows that I'm guessing you mean "not capable of teaching well."

Second to last sentence, put a "she is" in between "and" and "still"

Last sentence: you say you "picked her up." This means you lifted her off the ground. Perhaps use ...

"This is why I picked her as the old person whom I have met."
"This is why I chose her as the old person whom I have met."

Dora Said:

check my english writing pelase?

We Answered:

It is pretty good, but there are a few mistakes, or irregularities, starting with your question. It should read like this:

Check my English please. I have written the following letter and need someone who is fluent in english to check it. Does any of it sound unnatural, and are there any mistakes?

Thank you for your interest in Gordon's office supplies. Here is the information which you inquired about: A strong black binder is $45. If you buy more than 6, they are $42, a savings of 12 dollars. Our company produces various kinds of office supplies, from ball point pens to support materials. We have enclosed a catalog of our current products for your consideration. For your convenience,please use the order sheet in the middle of the catalog, or call our toll free number 24 hours a day to place your order. Please feel free to contact us anytime for assistance.

Marion Said:

Would you check my English writing?

We Answered:

Interesting. What country did this Civil defense drill take place? If this really happened, it's a real loss of freedom!

"However, THE Civil defense drills WERE"
"Some people who wore ARMBANDS"
"I thought that WOULD reinforce the drill."
"However, what I couldn't understand is WHY they stopped people from walking."
"It happened ALL of a sudden."
"People WERE stuck."
"What was amazing WAS most people just behaved as THE people with the ARMBANDS demanded."
"The people proved their obedience like sheep."
"even if they got it in THE wrong way."
Last sentence doesn't quite make sense.