Douglas Said:

Help! Please help me correct my grammar. English?

We Answered:

Since June of 2008, I supervised the technical issues for our suppliers. First, I explained all the mechanical details such as: test standards, dimensions, the symbols used for drawings, etc to the members of their project, the measurement engineers, and to the suppliers' test engineers. Next a Question and Answer session was held with those involved. Meanwhile, I calculated the formula which can meet the 0 PPM quality request which was proposed by the quality department based on my knowledge of statistics and the theory of probability. I then designed a template which can automatically produce the statistical results of the dimension report, by 'Excel' with my colleagues from the IT department. After that, I made certain that the Mould experts, the Supplier Quality Assurance (SQA) and those involved in the mould trial in the suppliers plant, measured the outcomes by Three Coordinate Measure Instrument (CMM) and provided dimension reports.


Good Luck with this!

Duane Said:

Help~~~~~~For correcting my English grammar~Thank you!?

We Answered:

First I must say you have a very impressive vocabulary for a person who wants help with grammar! Here is what is should be, and I have capitalized anything I have changed. Note that on some sentences, I had to guess as to what your meaning was, so I appologize if I have accidentally changed your intended meaning.

In this project, I applied my mechanical knowledge to support, monitor, assess and audit the technical points of suppliers. FACED WITH the complex block point, I was able to actively search FOR the solution FROM a technical point of VIEW, then make a decision rapidly which can meet the time and cost requirements. Meanwhile, I synthesized my mathematical and mechanical knowledge to make a template for assisting calculations. THIS can HELP SAVE time WHEN evaluating dimension reports, not only for myself but also for other project R&D Engineers. FINALLY, I cooperated with other engineers effectively, which ENABLED the project team to conduct the entire job smoothly and successfully.

Ramona Said:

What's my job title? "Secretary" doesn't quite cut it....?

We Answered:

I'm with little sid. You are an executive assistant....