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Official Letter Writing Samples

Angel Said:

As a Republican do you believe a Democratic administration would deny health care to Republicans?

We Answered:

No I do not but however it is an intriguing idea not without merit.Its obvious appeal would be that self-professed sturdy REAL AMERICANS
could put into practice values of self-reliance which they so cherish.Unless these exponents of LIBERTY have not noticed medical care is already rationed by INSURANCE COMPANIES whose only allegiance is to profit realized by denying health care and treatment.

Ethel Said:

Very important appreciation letter, please help with language.?

We Answered:

Though your English is correct, the impression given by your draft is that it is written by a person who is unfamiliar with the formulation and colloquialisms used in this type of situation.

I suggest some slight alterations that will give your text a more authentic ring.

Mr (^)
(Address)


Dear ^,

I would like to take this opportunity to express my heartfelt thanks to you personally for the very fine assistance and the hospitality which I received during the ***, hosted by ****, (name of the city), (month and year of event)

It gives me great pleasure to praise your highly skilled competencies and your outgoing personality. These impressed me both at a professional and a personal level. I was pleased to hear of your ambitions and strong desire for a successful career, and I am proud of your trust in discussing these with me. I believe that you are going the right way to achieve your objectives and, in view of your youth and dedication, you will certainly realise your ambitions.

I will continue to take a great interest in your professional progress. Please accept my most sincere wishes for a successful, fortunate and bright future.

Kind regards,

PS. Personally I would use " I am very flattered by your trust" rather than "I am proud of your trust".

Edit (20 hours later)
Ref. your additional question:
It is perfectly fine to write:
"...... during the (name of event), hosted by your (with an r at the end) government, in (city), in June 2008".
for instance: "during the International Convention hosted by your government in Barcelona in June 2008".

James Said:

Your opinion, "ICE mistakenly failed to deport convicts?

We Answered:

No, this was no mistake. Consider the state this "mistake" happened in- California. They are notorious for releasing criminal illegals, even violent felons, back onto the streets.

Rachel Said:

Quick! Please help... I need a link for this answer today!?

We Answered:

Other than the above link also try the following

http://www.iwbf.org/pdfs/IWBF%20Internat…

http://64.233.167.104/search?q=cache:KVw…

This one should be what you need
http://www.usabasketball.com/loc-applica…

Phillip Said:

What do you think ICE mistakenly failed to deport convicts would you say Hecka of a job Obama?

We Answered:

This was no mistake. California is notorious for returning illegal aliens convicted of crimes back onto the streets. We now have proof that ICE is in on that racket.

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