Arlene Said:

How much money has been spent on the presidential campaign?

We Answered:

The amount of money spent on campaigning could probably feed every family of 4 in the US for a year

Norma Said:

Can you please help me edit this letter? Pretty please?

We Answered:

good letter. too much use of the word " I " and please consider firmly the inclusion of negativity.

Janet Said:

I have been unfairly dismissed from my employment?

We Answered:

You are wasting your time writing a grievance letter. You need to have been in the job for at least a year before you can bring a case for unfair dismissal.

Sidney Said:

Can you please help me edit this critical letter to my father?

We Answered:

All the mistakes are capitilized..







Dear Blank:

I am writing you this letter, as I am not sure you received my first one. I tried to confirm this by leaving you a phone message. I did not want to leave another message as do not wish to bother anyone.

Since writing you my first letter, things have become much better for me. In fact, it was a very cathartic experience as I was finally able to RELEASE the memory of that day. After I wrote that letter, (COMMA) I was able to forgive myself and others. I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances.

Eventually it became apparent I was letting the negative events and individuals of that day adversely affect me. I was letting it affect my self-esteem, self-image, self-worth and thus my soul. This only helped me to discover something called “self-acceptance”. That-- regardless of my past mistakes-- (ADDED ---), I am still a wonderful person. I am still beautiful no matter how others may have treated me or what others may have written about me in your system.

What matters most is what I think of myself. As long as I know that I am a good person, there is nothing that anyone can say or do to change that. People can gossip and write all the disparaging remarks, but it no longer affects me. I realized it is just their erroneous opinions, thoughts, comments, theories, words, beliefs, assumptions, perceptions, feelings, judgments, attitudes and perspectives. It’s all subjective unless you really know the person. In short, it is just their minds and opinions, which cannot hurt me.

In conclusion, my soul has been restored. I am once again happy, bubbly, free – spirited and loving. Above all, I still love myself!

Anyhow, I wanted confirmation that you received my initial letter. I was hoping you would share your thoughts or comments. I hope you receive this final letter. I would love to hear from you either way via email or phone. If not, I totally understand and you wish all the best.
Email: ----------------------------------------…
Phone: -----------------------------

I conclude with my favourite quote from the Movie Gia.

Life and Death
Energy and Peace
If I stopped today, it was still worth it
Even the terrible mistakes that I have made and would have unmade if I could
The pains that have burned me and scarred my soul
It was worth it
For having been aloud to walk where I walked
Which was to hell on earth
Heaven on earth
Back again
Into
Under
Far in between
Through it
In it and above

Kindest Regards,

Mrs. Blank
B.A & B.S.W (Dean’s Honours List)

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it'sr eally good, but there are some mistakes that I didnt highlight because I didn't know if you did it on purpose or not. Like, it's not very... flowy... like there's periods all the time. Example: She has a cat. She likes her cat. Her cat is nice. An example from direct text: I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances.
It's not a very BIG deal, but maybe you did it on purpose, just try to make it more flowy-er. And a lot of them start with "I".
Anyway, other than those tiny mistakes, it was really good!

Paul Said:

I need someone to help me edit this letter?

We Answered:

May 29, 2009:

Dear Blank:

I am writing you this letter, as I am not sure you received my first one. I tried to confirm this by leaving you a phone message. I did not want to leave another message, as do not wish to bother anyone. This is also another reason I rarely call.

Since writing you my first letter, things have become much better for me. In fact, it was a very cathartic experience as I was finally able to RELEASE the memory of that day. After I wrote that letter I was able to forgive myself and others. I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances.

Eventually, it became apparent I was letting the negative events and individuals of that day adversely affect me. I was letting it affect my self-esteem, self-image, self-worth and thus my soul. This only helped me to discover something called “self-acceptance”. That regardless of my past mistakes, I am still a wonderful person. I am still beautiful, no matter how others may have treated me or what others may have written about me in your system.

What matters most is what I think of myself. As long as I know that I am a good person, there is nothing that anyone can say or do to change that. People can gossip and write all the disparaging remarks about me, but it no longer affects me. I realized it is just their thoughts, opinions, comments, theories, words, beliefs, assumptions, perceptions, politics, philosophies, assertions, feelings, judgments, attitudes and perspectives. In short, it is just their minds and opinions, which cannot hurt me.

In conclusion, my soul has been restored. I am once again happy, bubbly, free – spirited. caring and loving. Above all, I still love myself!

Anyhow, I had wanted to receive confirmation that you received my initial letter. It was my hope that you would share your thoughts or comments. Therefore, I would love to hear from you either way via email or phone. If not, I totally understand and you wish all the best.

Email: ------------------------------
Phone: ----------------------------

Life and Death
Energy and Peace
If I stopped today, it was still worth it
Even the terrible mistakes that I have made and would have unmade if I could
The pains that have burned me and scarred my soul
It was worth it
For having been aloud to walk where I walked
Which was to hell on earth
Heaven on earth
Back again
Into
Under
Far in between
Through it
In it and above

Kindest Regards,

Mrs. Blank
B.A & Bsc. (Dean’s Honours List)