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Luis Said:

Can anyone good in writing essay correct my essay?

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Our society has placed a critical restriction on drinking and smoking ages, especially on the younger people since drinking at early ages is thought to be harmful for their bodies. However, younger people at present take in plenty of nutrition compared to past generations and, as a result, they have better developed bodies. With such physical changes to the younger generation’s bodies, smoking and drinking can be still harmful for the health and that is why we still have to hold on to several strategies for the sake of the younger people.

First of all, the most obvious reason why we have to keep such strategy is that the rapid physical growth of younger people does not mean they are emotionally mature. Even though they may not be able to find any difficulty in smoking or drinking, they are still too immature to distinguish what is right and wrong. That is why they have to be protected under legal circumstances and be limited from doing something that could be harmful at early ages. Secondly, smoking has already proved to be harmful for many people of all ages. That means that, at whatever ages they are smoking, it is still harmful for them. In the case of smoking, young teenagers spend most of their time studying. However, by committing alcohol abuse during adolescence, they must cause many different social problems. According to recent research, the students who drink heavily and frequently have shown impaired memory ability, being three times more likely to attempt suicide than those who do not drink. Most certainly, there is no study on how much better the younger generation’s bodies have developed in comparison to the previous generations. Therefore, we should not decide yet to ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy.

It seems as if we should not ease the restriction on under-age drinking and smoking policy at this stage due to several reasons. Whatever has taken place, it is generally true that smoking and drinking at early age are very harmful and further problems associated with them can be caused by the younger people who abuse them. Scientists need to study more on how human beings' bodies have developed and, until then, such a furious debate should be suspended.

Billie Said:

Can I get in trouble for writing an essay about marijuana?

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There is a chance you could get in trouble. Since it is school. I don't know what state you live in or if you were smoking it per medicinal guidelines. Such as having a license for it. The best rule to use is to never admit you actually do anything illegal in any sense. You don't actually get in trouble for writing about it due to freedom of speech. They flip it around on you and say it's probable cause to search you etc. So you just have to be careful. If you don't actually posses any amount of it you would be fine. You may end up having to sit in the principals office for a while though being badgered with questions like 'WHY DO YOU SMOKE WEED? WHO WERE THE PEOPLE? TELLS US WHERE YOU GET IT!' You could also get suspended from school. Depending on if your administration is all about that zero-tolerance in any aspect stuff. It all depends on your teacher's viewpoint in that aspect. Most likely be given a warning.

Some other good info... depending on your age they may treat you differently. In the end it gives any official probable cause to suspect you are up to illegal activities. Therefore allowing them to search you, your locker and personal belongings (including car). I have learned the hard way not to do that. When I smoked I never drank or did anything else and was always 'designated dave' for people. Was amusing. It is fairly harmless and not as big of a deal as it's made out to be. Regardless of personal opinion though never disclose illegal activity in any sense pertaining to you as an individual. So if you do have some stuff you shouldn't have I would get rid of it temporarily. Just to be on the safe side.

Kenneth Said:

how do i go about writing a personal essay ?

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Basically you just want to start writing about a chosen topic and let your mind and pen (word processor, pc, etc) go to work. Once you have completed your creative portion, you can edit it to fit the needs of your essay topic. As an example, I was traveling by rail recently and while waiting for my train decided to put pen to paper:

The hustle and bustle of the crowd reminds me of ants scurrying to harvest food for the winter. People walk in every direction as if they have some place to go. Others sit and wait, for their journey has not yet begun. They sit staring at this and that. Many have removed their shoes to relieve the steamy hot feet which are now exhausted from the day's constant on the move walking. Lovers embrace as they set to part company. A young girl fans herself from the humid heat that the day has brung (brought). Text messages by the dozens are being hammered out and the loud speaker announces it is time for the next wave of passengers to go to the platform.

Francis Said:

How much do you write for the ACT writing essay part?

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I'd say 4-5 paragraphs, depending on how long your paragraphs are and how much to the point they are.

If you have a hard time speed-writing, a good way to practice is to write your essays with a pen on paper (rather than typing or using a pencil). This way you can't erase much and so it teaches you to write non-erasable stuff - which is essential because if you're erasing all the time you won't be able to get much written in 30 minutes. Using this method I typically half the amount of time I spend writing compared to writing with a pencil or on the computer.