Marcus Said:

I need help with my writing workshop!?

We Answered:

http://ask.com

Alfred Said:

Did you know that our DC Bureaucrats had a big funding party yesterday for an Islamic Terrorist organization?

We Answered:

Obama does like to support the Muslims whenever he can.. wonder how Netanyahou felt about the whole affair!

Jeffery Said:

essay for college app. please proofread...feedbacks appreciated...?

We Answered:

1) "never-settle-FOR-less-than-my-best"
2) You mention Li Bai but they wouldn't remember what
that refers to
3) "blaming my mediocrity ON my cultural heritage"
4) "six-hour course on readings from Western culture"
5) "characters I HAD never even heard of..."
6) images or imagery, not imageries
7) Surprisingly, there WERE none
8) HUMA brought my GPA down (not HAD brought)
9) even though I may not have been the brightest student...
(in order to match the past tense of "I was the most
hard-working")
10) "...will only make me try harder" (not "to try harder")
And maybe you could connect this to the next
sentence: "...will only make me try harder, and
being with better students...." It flows better that
way.

Good luck!!

Marlene Said:

Grant application question- "Do you forsee any risks which may affect your project?"?

We Answered:

Here are some risks that really could affect your project. I don't know your organization, but you need to be realistic:

-- staff turnover (staff leaving for better jobs/better pay)

-- lack of competitive salaries to attract top-quality staff to your organization to carry out its mission

-- volunteer turnover (not being able to retain volunteers; constantly training new volunteers)

-- lack of resources to adequately train volunteers (do you have a volunteer manager, and does that person his or herself have training in volunteer management, or is it someone that just agreed to help?)

-- a downtown in the economy leading to greater numbers of unemployed and less employment opportunities, beyond what you are ready to deal with

-- reduction in funding for your organization by other funders, because of the election of new officials with different priorities

-- a bus driver's strike or mechanical problem interfering with the bus pick-up service

In other words -- in a year, if you have NOT been able to provide the promised number of workshops on parenting, mental health, relationships, etc., if you have NOT been able to assist a large number of clients with access to employment, education, etc., or if you have NOT been able to provide bus pick-up service, lunch and childcare, WHY might be the reasons that make this so?

Arthur Said:

Would you please edit this poem for me? :D?

We Answered:

I don't know... I feel like you need to revise the syntax, it feels very choppy.