Alfredo Said:

How do I write an essay introduction about the Verdun War?

We Answered:

use it as a non descriptive summary of your essay and put an important date in it that will reference one of your main points in the essay. make sure you over embelish in the 1st paragraph in order to make it more readable and progressive.

Freddie Said:

I need help writing an introduction for an essay about poverty int the United States.?

We Answered:

America is the wealthiest country in the history of the world, yet 71 [or whatever the number you are using in your essay is] million Americans live below the poverty line. While America is certainly the "Land of Opportunity," it has always had a significant percentage of its people who meet the definition of poverty [I hope you have such a definition in your essay]. Today, many Americans and their children continue to live in poverty. For poverty to end, it is necessary that every American have the opportunity for education that will allow them to earn a sufficient living for themselves and for their future generations.


You see, what you have done is skipped right to the solution, without briefly stating what the problem is. Your essay topics seem to cover that - now just have your introductory thesis statement track what you are going to say in the essay.

Good luck to you

Tyrone Said:

I need a really good introduction for an essay?

We Answered:

I recently read a book about Marilyn Monroe. She like her mother had mental problems. She heard voices. Even though she was extremely beautiful, sweet and popular, she died a very sad woman. She had fertility problems, drinking and drug problems, and problems with deceitful men, including the president, John Kennedy.
You could tell all about her exciting career, beautiful looks, interesting friends and lovers, and all the money she made. But in the end she was a very, very sad individual.

Jay Said:

I need help writing an introduction to my comparison/contrast essay. Help?

We Answered:

Two great writers: Then state their names. And end with that.

Troy Said:

what is a good 5 sentence introduction for writing an essay on South Korea.?

We Answered:

People began living on the Korean Peninsula and its surrounding areas from some 700,000 years ago. Since the Gojoseon age until the end of the last Korean war, it has been wracked with nations wanting to control and exploit its resources and people. Since the signing of the cease-fire between north and South Korea in July of 1953, South Korea has flourished as a people and a nation. Today South Korea enjoys a democratically elected president and a country that is rich in culture, sports, and tourism while becoming a prominent nation in the current world economy.

That's five with a thesis at the end.

Start here and work your way through the thesis topics you want to include

http://www.korea.net/