Ralph Said:

How should I write my english essay?

We Answered:

I think there's really nothing else to add on to your essay. I like the idea, tho!

Maybe you could write about a girl bieng trapped in her dream. Like her dream is so powerful it's taken over her bieng and she get can't get out of the dream no matter what anyone does. And like her family and friends think she's in a coma.

Jared Said:

How do you write essay? please help!?

We Answered:

I hope you love writing as much as I do. English is my second language too, but I learned it pretty fast because personally I think this is the easiest language. I came from Russia when I was a 3rd grader.

Anyways, a descriptive paragraph is a description of a certain character or place or thing for example,

Allyson. Oh, the beautiful Ally. With her shiny and silky brown hair and warm lake blue eyes with a reassuring smile that reached them, she befriended everyone she knew. She was a long a lean girl, probably tall and beautiful enough to be a model. I often liked to watch the way she walked and her perfectly naturally straight brown hair sparkled in the sunlight.

...something like that...

To start an essay, first list a couple of topics or experiences in life that you can relate to. Then, out of those, pick the topic that you can write most about.

Then create a freytag's pyramid for your story. This is what a freytag's pyramid is ---
http://oak.cats.ohiou.edu/~hartleyg/250/…

Then, your writing will just flow if you follow your chart.

Also, check out this site for some writing tips. I use it all the time.

http://www2.actden.com/Writ_Den/Tips/ess…


Best of luck to you!