Morris Said:

Help with writing a sonnet?

We Answered:

here's a start

Write down a thorough description, just get words on paper.

Choose an imaginary person to write it to.

Have an opinion you want to explain ( why I love being out in nature or why I dislike paintings of art instead of the real thing or contrasting the real with the imaginary or how difficult it is to see beauty and have no one to share it with)

Then look at some words to see how you might rhyme them.

Try out some beginning sentences. When summer paths lead to the mountain
or My mother told me long ago

Just keep throwing down thoughts to get it going.

Courtney Said:

can somebody help me with writing?

We Answered:

Change up your sentence structures, don't use the same one over and over.

Ex: "Sally ran down the road towards her house. The breeze felt nice on Sally's face. She could run forever if she wanted to." <Boooooorrrrriiiiiinnnnngggggg.
Instead, try: "The breeze splashed cooley onto Sally's face as she ran down the road. Energy pumped through her legs, making it feel as if she could run forever."

So, combine sentences, play with sentence structures, add details, use a thesaurus to find more interesting words to use in place of often repeated words or just generally uninteresting and not very descriptive words.

Hope I helped :D

Nellie Said:

Help with writing a report. (150 Words Or Less)?

We Answered:

Hi,

Here's some points of interest:
1.) The riot in Attica was based in part upon prisoners' demands for better living conditions, and was led in large part by a small band of political revolutionaries.
2.) On September 9, 1971, responding to the death of prisoner George Jackson, a black radical activist prisoner who had been shot to death by corrections officers in California's San Quentin Prison on August 21, about 1,000 of the prison's approximately 2,200 prisoners rioted and seized control of the prison, taking 33 staff hostage.
3.) During the following four days of negotiations, authorities agreed to 28 of the prisoners' demands, but would not agree to demands for complete amnesty from criminal prosecution for the prison takeover or for the removal of Attica's superintendent. Under order of governor Nelson Rockefeller, state police took back control of the prison. When the uprising was over, at least 39 people were dead, including ten correction officers and civilian employees.
4.) The prisoners continued to unsuccessfully negotiate with Correctional Services Commissioner Russell G. Oswald
5.) Within four years of the riot, 62 inmates had been charged in 42 indictments with 1,289 separate counts. One state trooper was indicted for reckless endangerment.

Inmates and families of inmates killed in the prison retaking sued the State of New York for civil rights violations by law enforcement officers during and after the retaking of Attica. After 27 years in the courts, in 2000, the State of New York agreed to pay $12 million to settle the case.[11] The State of New York also recognized the families of the slain prison employees in the autumn of 2004 with a $12 million financial settlement.

Ricky Said:

Hello so I need help with writing an explanation to a professor this is what I have so far.?

We Answered:

that sounds good. i'd send that

Kay Said:

Help with writing ionic and net equations?

We Answered:

Not really sure what you're after here. Sorry.

u

David Said:

Story writing help with the theme of journeys?

We Answered:

Story: "Dearth of a Salesman"
Is about a traveling salesman who is never home, and his family misses him. Point of view: His transgender wife and their adopted children.

Story: "Odd Odyssey"
A soldier returning home from Iraq finds himself stranded in the middle of the Aegean Sea, where he fights monsters and such, and finally makes it home to his loving, faithful wife and son. Twist ending: He is in a coma dreaming all of this, due to a bullet lodged in his brain, his wife has been cheating on him the whole time, and he has never met his son. The doctors lament that he will remain in a vegetative state for the rest of his considerably short life.

Poem: "The Interstate Man"
Short poem about hitchhiker/serial killer.

Evelyn Said:

Help with writing a poem about cupcakes?

We Answered:

The cupcake proudly took top billing in the cake display
But little children were drawn to poke it
And the lovely icing became pock marked.
Its little silver balls were pushed in
And the cake looked wounded and diseased.
It was lost, never to be eaten.


Inspired by MacArthur Park by Jimmy Web

"MacArthur's Park is melting in the dark
All the sweet, green icing flowing down
Someone left the cake out in the rain
I don't think that I can take it
'Cause it took so long to bake it
And I'll never have that recipe again
Oh, no!"