Roberta Said:

I am writing an essay, I need a thesis sentence to start me off?

We Answered:

This is going to sound silly, but it works...

Write 'I want to tell you that..." then insert your overall message (all in one sentence)... then take away the "I want to tell you that"...

And there you go! An easy and effective way to write a thesis sentence... good luck!!

Joseph Said:

I need some help writing a thesis for my essay!?

We Answered:

The thesis statement should answer the prompt in a complete sentence.
Example: Most Americans should not use credit cards because_________________.

Maureen Said:

Need help with thesis statement on an essay writing. the topic is "discipline at school"?

We Answered:

Depends on what message you intend to convey in the essay.

For example:
Too much and too strict a discipline and rigid rules can stilt the development of creativity and prevent the intellectual blossoming of children can be one statement if that is what you feel about it.

You may equally well take the opposite stand.