Pauline Said:

How should I go about writing a Thesis Statement for a Comparitive Essay?

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You will find the steps and outlines at http://www.creativewriting-prompts.com/a… useful. You can also download free venn diagrams which can help you identify the similarities and differences between the two topics.

Adam Said:

I am having troubles writing a thesis statement for this argument essay?

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when did tipping start? why? by who? how has it evloved? which countries/regions do it?
why are u for tipping? some personal experience? what are some advantages? shoudl everyone tip? should every business get tips?
what are the disadvantages? what countries/regions do it?-why? should everyone tip?

David Said:

I need help with writing a thesis statement for a research essay.?

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A thesis statement is NOT your opinion, opinions are for editorials, research papers never are personal and never use personal pronouns (I,he, she, we, us, they, etc.). You practically wrote a thesis statement in your question:
"The differences between government, political views, and military status of Athens and Sparta helped to lead to the Peloponnesian War."
Then describe what led to the war, you may need to add to the statement when you do your research, for example, Athenians treated their women and children very differently, so society may have played a role in their various points of view.
Careful of spelling and use 3rd person only. The actual war itself is incidental, and was actually Sparta vs the Peloponnesian League, a group of city-states with Athens as the predominant leader.

Lance Said:

Help on writing a thesis statement for Persuasive essay?

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The school board should require students in the district to wear uniforms because A, B and C.

That's the thesis at it's most basica, but if you are supposed to argue that you're in favor of it, I really don't see how your current 3 arguments will help you at all...especially your argument about rape.