Angela Said:

How Can I Improve My Essay Writing On Tests?

We Answered:

practice your essay writing on random subjects, for example when watching tv or listening to the radio, practice alot ... Good Luck=)

Loretta Said:

How to start an essay writing about myself, not by my name is ----?

We Answered:

the best way is to start out with a situation when you are talking about ur self. or, even better make up a quote of something u said when u were little about something u liked/ didn't like
for example: <<A blonde four year girl, standing at a height all of 39 inches stared up at her parents with an attempt at a terrorizing look in her carribean blue eyes. " I don't want the blue one, i want mine greeeen!">> And then say, every since i was little, i knew exactely what i wanted. ....and then start to talk about your likes and dis likes.


ok that was a bad example but u get what i mean, just flood the hook with tons of adjectives to grad the readers attention. hope that helps :))

Sergio Said:

Question about the CAHSEE essay? Writing about obvious things and how people notice them?

We Answered:

I actually find it strange that you chose that topic as something that's easily distinguished and obvious - mainly because for years, people have been trying to discern body language and what they mean. And there's that whole area of women and men and their body languages; I would far from call it obvious.

I don't think you're going to fail, though. As long as your writing was well, you're going to do fine.