Erica Said:

Writing a persuasive essay about a turkey on Thanksgiving?

We Answered:

I would have the turkey talk about his family and say " if thanksgiving is about sharing things with your family why dont you spare me so that I can tell my family about the kind and giving farmer who spared our lives so that we could have something to be truly thankful for and you can tell your family about the talking turkey that you met that turned you into a vegetarian."


I like your begining but i think i would have instead of a gun to the head have the turkey on the"chopping block" and talk as the man raises the axe. also I would not put the "no ill do better than that......"

Vernon Said:

Writing a critical lens essay about Food Inc. Doc. any ideas?

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Cheap foods are cheaper because less nutritional, lower quality ingredients, that are often loaded with fats, sugars and other additives, are used.

Cheryl Said:

What am I supposed to say in an entrance essay?

We Answered:

You want quality, not quantity, and if you say something is "cheap" it assumes the education u get isn't as high standards as other colleges that are "lower priced", or "manageable".