Jessica Said:

if you work as a community service and they ask you to write an essay what are the best words can you put ?

We Answered:

right about what you learned doing the community service, how you felt you made a difference, how you view what teachers do and or appreciate what they do.

Marjorie Said:

Help writing my essay for National Jr. Honor Society?

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If you have A's, I think your capable, you're just being lazy.

Adam Said:

What is the best approach to a boarding school admissions essay? (Deerfield Academy)?

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If you keep in mind the broader goal of communicating a little bit about what makes you the great person that you are, while showing how you would fit in the Deerfield community, you shouldn't go far wrong.

So part 1 ideas: what makes you passionate?, what community service project were you REALLY passionate about (not just hours put in, but talk about why it was important to you)?

Part 2 ideas: Try to show how Deerfield would fit in - would you be able to continue your community service, skiing, or other interests there (and would Deerfield perhaps allow, encourage your development of leadership skills)? Implicitly, by the nature of your answer, you're suggesting that you would be bringing some great qualities to Deerfield, including the desire to grow in your abilities.

As I recall, any essay for boarding school should be kept reasonably short, so I think your general approach should be to write lots - free flow your best ideas - and then, edit, edit, edit, picking out the best parts that meet the over all objective.

You'll do fine, sounds like you have a lot of good interests! Good luck.

Ben Said:

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We Answered:

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