Maureen Said:

Creative Writing piece. Help me with a splendid intro!?

We Answered:

And where is your article? You need to post it here so people can respond accordingly.

Ralph Said:

Creative Writing Project, Yet Again...?

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bad spaces:
teased at school
yelled at for something you didn't do
people who used to be friends now talk about you

good spaces:
parents let you use car to go shopping
got good grade on test
go on date with boy you like a lot


btw...I don't think I would have ones who get down to zero commit suicide. I think I would just have them be losers. That can make someone depressed enough if they think they are losers.

Juanita Said:

How can I start my creative writing piece?

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The big breakthrough came when he remembered his name during a dream about winning the lottery.

Ramona Said:

Creative writing?????????????????

We Answered:

um you could like list some of the stuff you like first...like....um
singing, dancing, having fun. everyday and every night. Jenny is my name and i love going to the beach and surf with my best friends.

ok.i admit it sounds kind of bad....but you could do something like that but make it sound better

Hazel Said:

Creative Writing help?

We Answered:

Blood dripping from fresh torn wounds. an army arising from twisted bones, forging and pushing through the enforcers. With pride and virtue they slay the oppressing enemy's with no sight of the bloody red battle field they left behind. They scorn there weapons with burnt flesh and tattered clothes. with victory ahead they morn no fallen.