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Anthony Said:

i need history whizzes.................................…

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Since this is posted under "Computers - Laptops" Im assuming that you have a Laptop Question regarding the Novel above.

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Ida Said:

Can someone please help me with my english? Automotive retail cover letter?

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THIS IS THE NEW VERSION BELOW:

Dear Manager

I've been purchasing tools and spare parts from your store for months, admiring the vast selection of products you have and hoping there was a chnce i would get the opporunity to work there, until now it wasn't possible. However today I am in a position to apply for a part time/casual retail salespersons position providing you have a vacancy.
I decided to write a cover letter to introduce myself and then ask for an in-person meeting to discuss what you are looking for. I currently work as a part time Mechanic for Subaru ******* and study at ******** completing my Advanced Diploma of Automotive Management. Therefore my availability is limited only for the weekends (Saturday and Sunday full day) until December.
I have worked in a few automotive workshops, working on a vast range of Japanese and European vehicles. Searching for correct reliable spare parts was one of the biggest objectives I had at work, which is what was so appealing to me about this job, aswell as the oppotunity to learn how to provide the customers with their desired spare part/tool.
Furthermore in the past as a Subway restaurant supervisor I have learned a lot about customer service and how a happy customer will promote the business whereas an unhappy customer could actually demote the business.
Overseas I have a background which allowed me to work on a vast amount of cars aswell as key involement in car sales as my father owns a car yard, hence the reason I became a mechanic.
Now I seek an opportunity to further develop my customer service and managing skills and I think that this would be a better career path in the long run. I hope that my knowledge in vehicles would be an advantage for this job.
If you'd like to schedule an interview with me, and I hope you do, please call me on ********* and state a date and a time and I'll be there.


The way your english was great to begin only a few grammactical errors. hope you like the improved version above.

Shannon Said:

What can i do with my skills and experience?

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I have similar problems, I wish I could help, I have become obsolete myself. If I were you I'd go back to school, the econony sucks it is a good time to build for the future. or just start teaching again.

I's hire you but alas I am of no use anymore. lol

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