Jessica Said:

Question about writing a business letter?

We Answered:

'Dear Sir' or 'Dear Sirs' should be fine!

Christine Said:

I am in a lot of debt and I am writing a business letter to the credit card company..?

We Answered:

Having it notarized isn't going to make them call off their collection procedures.

It is nice you want to let them in on what is going on with your life, but this isn't going to put a halt to the bill coming every month and them reporting you as delinquent to the credit bureaus.

Instead of focusing on writing letters to credit card companies, get your resume written!

Alberto Said:

I need help writing a business letter, very simple.?

We Answered:

it's all in the tone of the letter just express interest and gratefulness if they are willing to help, but to strait out say hey man tell me that is rude but if u go about writing it respectfully people love to talk about their business and their jobs it's their livelihood.

Robert Said:

I need a good topic for writing a business letter...Any ideas?

We Answered:

These guys can help or at least point you in the right direction: www.wordtechs.com. They were lots of help to me, and they do all kinds of writing. Also, only a few dollars and quick turn-around.

Good luck!
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Christina Said:

Business letter writing?

We Answered:

Here is how I would write it:

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First, I must apologize. In the letter dated 12/20/09, the proposed 'Alternative A' included the part,'…’...

Your understanding and consent of our intentions would be greatly appreciated.
\

In the first sentence much of the implied information can be eliminated. It is like using?unnecessary ??? and ???? That also eliminates many of the commas.

In the second sentence, the passive voice is better. In this instance, active voice comes across as ???, and it is a little too forceful or commanding.

Hope this helps!

Bob Said:

Need recommendation for a concise personal/ business letter writing book/guide. Thanks?

We Answered:

This website might help:

http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resour…

Especially check out "More Professional Writing Resources" (near bottom of the page).